''sweetness''

Girl
                                             skipping
                                        singing songs
                                        making friendships
                                               Lass

''Jack Out of the box'' Poetry Contest
sponsored by..Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:06 PM
A very sweet one about girls, Kacey. So this is a pretty new form for you then? you did quite well!
Green Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 4:19 PM
wonderful write, hope you win...
Sweetheart Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 2:24 PM
wonderful entry Kacey..good luck luv.. this one should be framed in gold and be a motto to many ..my friend.. excellent..
Mehta Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 2:19 PM
What short and sweet write on the theme with alliterations, Kacey
Greenlee Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 2:03 PM
I am frustrated because girl was centered when I sent it out for people to read.Now the first word is way off the center.Sorry,I tryed very hard to get this right Debbie.....Kacey
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