Sweetness

Every time I think of you
  my eyes they bleed tears,
Shadows in my memories,
remind me of all your fears.
   Consuming me and killing you,
our childrens cry,there sorrow true .
  I feel the pressure, crushing me down 
I hear the drums from up under the ground
  The sickness the sadness I'd die to be free.
 my barrowed time is running out on me.


                                      James ...................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:34 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today James. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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September 27, 2010 at 8:56 AM
DEEP AND WONDERFUL WRITE TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Nice expression " bleed tears" and my barrowed time running out on me,,very sentimental and sad, james
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