Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Sweetly Sings

Medicine of this soul faraway with a dream seventh Heaven looking across a sea
the other night went for a walk strolling against a cold wind distant thoughts

Crying seagulls on the beach looking around even snow lying in the sand 
it was quite an awakening cold cutting ice wind blowing across the brow

Listening to the echoing roars crunching of great cliffs tasting salted air
waves crashing thunder I thought of you as the surf sprayed on shores
 
Oh the moon as the winds howl laying golden whispers your name landing wishes fall on a star sparkling beams Heaven you came to me under a crystal blue white light 

An angel fallen who found one miracle lost in this world drunken in the chalice of love 
each drop dripping passion adoring loves beauty forever and always

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Ken Carroll January 19, 2015 at 6:06 PM Good stuff old friend!

Kelly Deschler January 18, 2015 at 4:38 PM It is a wonderful feeling when our wishes come true, and those last few lines of yours were filled with pure enchantment... A lovely poem, my dear friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2015 at 5:25 AM - A touching and beautiful poem, dear Liam - People seeking in stars, sea and earth .... and finds comfort and golden words :) - 7 + !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton January 18, 2015 at 2:58 AM so tender and loving Liam old pal superb hugs 7

Gary Bateman January 17, 2015 at 11:37 PM Hello Liam Mate!! This is a beautiful pen indeed. Methinks Sir, you have the "Leprechaun Choir" both singing and crying on this one. Best Always, Gary

Arthur Vaso January 17, 2015 at 10:51 PM This sweet poem flows like honey, great write liam !

Skat A January 17, 2015 at 9:53 PM Nively done. Love the taste and feeling of this poem... Love ~SKAT~

Meg Anderson January 17, 2015 at 8:33 PM Awe lovely! You are eloquent with your words!

Connie Marcum Wong January 17, 2015 at 6:03 PM Liam, what a beautiful poem of enchantment. Romance intertwined brilliantly through your lines. Ahhhh, what bliss is this! #7 Fav'ing this one. Blessings, Connie

Dorian Petersen Potter January 17, 2015 at 5:49 PM Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and very romantic poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam. Very dazzling! So dreamy sweet and tender to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. Last couplet by far the best. Just awesome! A very solid 7 +++ ++ from me! Very beautiful golden pen Liam! you're always the best!.smiling.Have a very wonderful weekend! God bless you and be with you always! You take care of yourself now! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^" "

Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 4:04 PM Just wow... like your poems... they r so vivid... nad!!

Jan Allison January 17, 2015 at 3:56 PM Your imagery is divine Liam :-) A 7 from me:-) Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 3:36 PM jan thank you dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated