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within the heat burns so sweet, if you are my valentine, beware dear lady if we meet, could be just sweet passions crime, exquisite.... in time... if the planets align... Don (quixote)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/18/2012 12:46:00 PM
um, can i just say...that it's a GREAT poem??? i love it!!! and i like the words you used. as my ela teacher would say, "strong language"! :D
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:12:00 PM
If you put much more romance and passion into this poem it would explode with love coming out from all edges! You are a romantic aren't you Don?! Alas I am as well, maybe perchance a hopeless romantic! I love your romantic piece! Great Work!!
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