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Sweet Waters

In the dusk's light shimmering cerise
woodland's sweet waters bring me peace.


For 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1217' Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick

May 19, 2023 at 3:48 AM

Ahh!! I enjoyed this one today. A soothing feeling within. Thanks for sharing this winner. Congratulations. Sara

Christuraj Alex

May 19, 2023 at 2:21 AM

Great and beautiful nature picture. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 6, 2011 at 7:16 PM

Contratulations on the win in the contest,andrea

Marty Owens

September 6, 2011 at 11:23 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 6, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2011 at 6:29 PM

Congrats on your win..Very creative work..Did look like a peaceful place..Sara

Kash Poet

September 5, 2011 at 3:24 PM

:)Congrats!!

Charlotte Puddifoot

September 5, 2011 at 3:08 PM

congrats on your win in the contest andrea with this lovely 'peaceful piece' :-) and I believe it's your birthday today so many happy returns!

Carolyn Devonshire

September 5, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Yes, this sight would bring me peace as well, Andrea. Just wish I had been there the moment that photo was taken. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Love, Carolyn

Judy Ball

September 5, 2011 at 12:39 PM

Great job here Andrea. Beautifully worded. Congrats and from what I notice from Wilma's comment Happy Birthday. :) God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels

September 5, 2011 at 8:22 AM

Hey there birthday Girl!! Congratulations on your win in John's contest :) love Wilma

Margaret Foster

September 5, 2011 at 5:13 AM

Peaceful, calming, a good place to be. Lovely words Andrea, well done. luv Marg

David Williams

September 5, 2011 at 3:34 AM

hey Andrea congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 5, 2011 at 3:21 AM

Congrats Andrea on a super fifth place win with this elegant entry so visual and sweet from the photo presented luv.. enjoy a super happy birthday my friend...

Caryl Ramsdale

September 5, 2011 at 1:43 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the Crystalline Euphony Contest by John Freeman. CR

John Freeman

September 5, 2011 at 1:37 AM

Andrea, cool idea.. Thanks...congratulations on a worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Nancy Jones

September 4, 2011 at 9:03 PM

you sent me to the dictionary with this euphonious gem... rust red preeshness, lady! ~n

Matthew Anish

September 4, 2011 at 7:57 PM

Beautiful short poem. I must look up "cerise". I don't know the meaning of that word. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Robert Johnson

September 4, 2011 at 3:40 PM

There's nothing so soothing as God's natural love. Like Moonsignor, sweet waters bring peace like a dove.

Black Eyed Susan

September 4, 2011 at 3:03 PM

very beautiful and flowing. how the form should be! i should have looked at yours before i did mine. your is a winner for sure :)

Fabiyas M V

September 4, 2011 at 9:43 AM

It is sweetly flowing piece,Andrea.I enjoyed it.Have a nice day!Fabiyas

Gwendolen Song

September 4, 2011 at 12:53 AM

Is it your Birthday yet???? I want to wish you a happy birthday..early! There is a sound to peace......I can hear it softly in this verse. Best of luck in this contest! Gwendolen