Fathima Dawood Poet Couplet

Sweet Sorrow

Secretly I cherish each moment
Serenely I wish for a renewal
Whimsically my adornment sways with the breeze
As softly and tearily I recall each past liase
Sweet serendipity completes this abysmal morrow
As I recount my blessings despite my sorrow

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Deneen White October 8, 2008 at 3:03 PM there are always hidden blesssings soemtimes we just need to take a moment to realize them through the sorrows, great write and thanks for your comments, take care D-ncye

Sara Lokken October 7, 2008 at 11:34 AM Very beautiful expression, with a positive ending.:) Thanks for your comments. Love, Sara

James Foulk October 6, 2008 at 10:53 AM a great piece of work, enjoyable read. thank you for reading my colorful leaves falling and for your comment.

Brian Strand October 6, 2008 at 7:06 AM The best way to lokk at things Fathima.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sean Kelly October 5, 2008 at 11:48 AM And one of your great blessings , Fathima , is your wonderful ability to create , with words...

Sharon Winter October 5, 2008 at 6:37 AM Bittersweet write. Beautifully expressed by a most talented poetess. Wishing you new and wonderful memories to create in a brighter tomorrow holding love. Love, Shar

Chitra Lakhera October 5, 2008 at 1:02 AM Calm and so touchy! Its more important to recall all the blessings than anything else. Simply very beautiful. Love and blessings, Chitra