Sweet Snow

Snow
falling
through the air
like coconut
flakes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 24, 2008 at 5:22 PM
What a wonderful similie--a creative view. The title compliments the piece. Thank you for allowing me to smile with your words. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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October 17, 2008 at 2:50 AM
Nigel this poem is great - I loved the comparison it's very cleaver - God Bless
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