Sweet Smell of Summer

The smell of a fresh cut lawn
Winters over been waiting so long

Chlorine water in a swiming pool
Eating ice-cream tell I get full

Sun tan lotion on a sunny day
Set off an amazing display

Fireworks like gun powder
colors get brighter sounds get louder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Thomas Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 12:40 PM
I love this one! I miss summer so much!
Christian Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 5:04 AM
thanks for your feed back onb my poetry, this is a wonderful poem, summer is sweet well written Jade
Goff Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 1:31 PM
fun couplet! Jade Exit, jmg
Kroeger Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 12:45 PM
I love the part about chlorine.. haha I'm a swimmer lol I like it its cute.
Moreno Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 12:38 PM
Great work, I like the different smells you described...Raul
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