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sweet smell of summer

The smell of a fresh cut lawn Winters over been waiting so long Chlorine water in a swiming pool Eating ice-cream tell I get full Sun tan lotion on a sunny day Set off an amazing display Fireworks like gun powder colors get brighter sounds get louder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/20/2009 12:40:00 PM
I love this one! I miss summer so much!
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Date: 4/17/2009 5:04:00 AM
thanks for your feed back onb my poetry, this is a wonderful poem, summer is sweet well written Jade
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:31:00 PM
fun couplet! Jade Exit, jmg
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:45:00 PM
I love the part about chlorine.. haha I'm a swimmer lol I like it its cute.
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:38:00 PM
Great work, I like the different smells you described...Raul
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