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Sweet Singing Sparrow

#Lover 1, Sweet singing sparrow whirls on the wings of white winds to reach this rainbow #LOVER 2, Bright and beautiful my alluring art's aura sends sights and sounds, cruising with cool, cute colours it lends thee love, life and light!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 7/29/2014 6:04:00 PM
Adeleke,... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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Date: 3/31/2011 9:21:00 AM
a wonderful piece, it moved so well.
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Date: 3/20/2011 12:04:00 PM
A very nice and gentle flow of words enjoyed the read. Thank you again for all of your kind words that support my poems it really helps to boost a person up best wishes to you Adeleke luv ~Virginia
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:51:00 PM
Sweet Haiku Adeleke, looks like a winner. Also a belated Congratulations on your preceding contest, an inspiring endeavor on your part. Thank you Adeleke for considering my poem an Honorable Mention. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/11/2011 11:24:00 AM
What a descriptive and uplifting poem, Adeleke. Beautifully written! Wish you success in the contest. Also want to let you know that I'm glad you commented as you did on John Freeman's blog. This debate is tearing apart our community. We come here for pleasure and entertainment, don't we? I hope you nab first place with this poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:24:00 AM
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:15:00 AM
adelke, how delicate and flowing this piece is! your words' colors exudes a certain sense of bliss.. best winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
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