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Sweet Singing Sparrow

#Lover 1, 

Sweet singing sparrow
whirls on the wings of white winds
to reach this rainbow


#LOVER 2,

Bright and beautiful
my alluring art's aura
sends sights and sounds,
cruising with cool, cute colours
it lends thee love, life and light!

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Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 6:04 PM

Adeleke,... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

James Foulk

March 31, 2011 at 9:21 AM

a wonderful piece, it moved so well.

Virginia Frayer

March 20, 2011 at 12:04 PM

A very nice and gentle flow of words enjoyed the read. Thank you again for all of your kind words that support my poems it really helps to boost a person up best wishes to you Adeleke luv ~Virginia

John Freeman

March 17, 2011 at 7:51 PM

Sweet Haiku Adeleke, looks like a winner. Also a belated Congratulations on your preceding contest, an inspiring endeavor on your part. Thank you Adeleke for considering my poem an Honorable Mention. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

March 11, 2011 at 11:24 AM

What a descriptive and uplifting poem, Adeleke. Beautifully written! Wish you success in the contest. Also want to let you know that I'm glad you commented as you did on John Freeman's blog. This debate is tearing apart our community. We come here for pleasure and entertainment, don't we? I hope you nab first place with this poem! Love, Carolyn