Sweet Shirts

"Sweet shirts!" they scream
as you pass wearing green
bright and so proud it hurts.
Good job wearing shirts.

Women with vests,
partially exposed chests,
I say, "Give it a rest!
Put away your chests!"

I once ate fruit,
since I thought it was cute,
and though it looked real good,
it was made of wood.

Now my mouth's sore,
and I just have no more
dish from which to serve dirt,
so I say, "Sweet shirts."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 27, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Uncle Chris took a bite of a wax fruit banana when he was two. Sigh. ****Danielle****
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September 24, 2009 at 2:21 PM
There are no metaphors in this poem.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:59 PM
Nice use of metaphors. Keep writing. Sara
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