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Sweet Shadow Trails

Celebrations! My younger sibling has arrived and I have the much desired company!
Jealousies! The sibling has taken my mom away and I am alone most of the time!
War! Being an elder my heart is larger than everyone's and I have to learn to share!
Care! Mother is tired or busy, and elder sis is mature enough to baby sit!
Tantrums! The younger sibling is howling demanding and I have to give in!
Smile! The baby has kissed and hugged me!

A smile curves on my lips 
As my baby sis pulls my braids
No more a silent raider are her sweet shadow trails
She plays and dances on warbling toes
Gurgling with joy and my finger in her hands
Holding hands we sing song ring-a-ring-a-roses
Up in the air she flies as I catch her with hugs and chiding's
Loud screams at spooned oats to deafen my ears
Her feet slip in my heels, her tiny waist holds my big skirts
My bags she drags, long waits for my holidays
Narrating stories of my crazy campus days
The cherub listens in awe and gaping eyes
Beds assembled with gifts after the child falls 
In deep slumber on her birthday eve's
My baby grows to joyful independent splendours 
Her wilful spirit chooses her own caramelised grains
Her curly top flutters when she flips her wings
Along with birds of her own moulded feathers
Migrating into her own wonderful warm territories
Gathering twigs to strengthen her nestlings 
My life remains filled with her lovely memories
Of war cries and tantrums, celebrations and smiles

January 12, 2016
Contest: When Younger Siblings Step In
Sponsor: Eve Roper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/26/2016 10:06:00 PM
BALVEEN, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/20/2016 3:19:00 AM
Hi Balveen. You've penned such a beautiful dedication to your baby sister!!! Congrats on your well, deserved WIN in the contest!!!! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Teddy!
Date: 1/18/2016 8:45:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/15/2016 5:45:00 PM
I am sure many can relate to the early sibling rivalry Balveen! Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:28:00 PM
Jan, with siblings there are always rivalries which often seem foolish with growing up years! Thanks & love....
Date: 1/15/2016 5:28:00 PM
Balveen, I love that last sentence as for the first stanza, “Of war cries and tantrums, celebrations and smiles”. I too was the oldest so those memories are still remembered when I see my younger siblings. . Congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step” contest.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thanks Eve for reviving nostalgic moments. Love, Balveen

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