Sweet Seventeen

small dew drop shines
loving touch of rose petal
sweet seventeen sings

February 26, 2019
Syllable count : 5,7,5
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Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 1:10 AM
Thank you. Line.
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:06 PM
this is really pretty. I'd give it a first place! Congrats on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea for your nice comment.
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:11 PM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Many thanks.
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Nothing like teen-age love. Nice one Subimal. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 12:49 AM
Thank you, Charles for your visit and comment
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:36 AM
- Congratulations Subimal, on your 3rd place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 12:47 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Bangalee Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 11:50 PM
beautiful sweet seventeen///
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 12:40 AM
Thank you for your visit.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 12:40 AM
Thank you for your visit.
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