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Sweet Seize

The breeze Has blown my way A brush of scented moisture Like a kiss upon my flushed cheeks Tender. Aura A sweet embrace Of a presence nearby That blends its thoughts with mine Mind eye. That sees, A silent give and take, That no one sees or hear yet echoes throughout the heavens It seems. Aware Thanks to the breeze That moves over the sea To brush a kiss upon the cheeks Sweet seize. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 05.16.10

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Date: 6/19/2010 8:22:00 PM
very beautiful!
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Date: 6/4/2010 8:12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Overwhelming magical imagery. love it! shar
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Caroline! "A brush of scented moisture!" Great picture! Thank you for all you comments. Alles Gute, Gert
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:01:00 PM
"Sweet seize", love it! You are heading straight to my favorites.
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:13:00 AM
amazing, and enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:24:00 AM
Wow Caroline, what a stunning write!!
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