Laura Breidenthal Poet Lyric

Sweet Seduction

[Verse 1]

My blood is ice inside your veins
Crawling underneath my skin
The price we pay to earn that name
The battle that we never win
Falling faster far below
Further into darkest depths
The kiss of death that you bestow
The poison that is on your…lips

[Chorus]

Sweet seduction
Drug addiction
Words that only he can mend
Sweet seduction
My affliction
Rise to only meet the end

[Verse 2-change]

Your thoughts they plant a grave in me
Like missiles shooting through the skies
The pain you watch but never see
Crystals falling from my eyes
Your words they feel like razor blades
Your touch like acid on the skin
Your love this agonizing pain
The battle that I’ll never…win

[Chorus]

[Breakthrough]
Swallowed up by
Sounds of screaming
Asking questions
Without meaning
Fall away…
FADE AWAY!!!!

[Chorus]
Sweet seduction
Drug addiction
Words that only he can mend
Your destruction
My affliction
Rise to only meet the end

The end…

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Pace Ink-U-Script April 29, 2012 at 3:40 AM An amazing write!!! INK-U-SCRIPT

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire January 5, 2012 at 5:32 PM Dear Laura, YOU are a Superb POETESS, Please read my POEM " I was Addicted " I'm not sure what Page its on I'll let YOU know later YOU are my Inspiration LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry Laura Breidenthal January 5, 2012 at 8:04 PM I am looking for the poem you asked me to read, but unfortunately I cannot find it. Perhaps I will come across it as I read through all your poems. Always, Laura

Sarah Seraphin November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM * “I Felt As Though I Were The Phantom of The Opera Were Somehow A Part of This Excellent Creation & Stirring Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Laura * Your Beauties Last Stanza Is Powerful * Can Be Viewed Amid A Couple of Lights * I Opt for The Love In Bright * Twas A Pleasure Your Precious Hearts Visit * Very Nice Poe * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Constantin Severin November 3, 2011 at 12:28 AM Thanks, Laura, for your kind comment, it was nice to read your beautiful soul from your expressive poetry...

Don Johnson November 2, 2011 at 5:19 PM drug addiction our affliction, fire burns intensively, better get another fiction, fix me better betterlee, sad stuff hey....Don

Elizabeth Wesley October 1, 2011 at 10:07 PM How well can the dilemma be described? You skin the subject with clarity and purpose - in other words, a great verse.

Jack Ross Jr. August 29, 2011 at 11:37 PM Awesome write lovely Lady Laura very vivid and descriptive...hoping this is just creative would be sad if you truly were addicted to drugs...sounds like you won the battle...with love....old Jack