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Sweet River of Dreams

Lost in lazy haze, floating past reality. sweet river of dreams Worlds known just to me, break the surface of my mind. dark, murky waters New escapes await. Drifting without pause or cause. River makes a bend. 2/16/2016 Contest: River of Dreams Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Rhoma Em

Date: 2/22/2016 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:27:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Arlene..

Sam Jameson

Date: 2/21/2016 7:20:00 PM

congratulations Arlene :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/21/2016 6:56:00 PM

Hi Arlene, Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest. I enjoyed the read.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/21/2016 2:00:00 PM

Very beautiful, Arlene; truly a river of dreams; the ending 'bend' is so expressive. Congratulations on placing first! // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 11:13:00 AM

Exquisite write :-) congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/21/2016 10:16:00 AM

Ahhh the unpredictable bending river. Naturally free-flowing --- life can sometimes be like this. Congrats on your high placement in this contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:14:00 AM

oh that last part was so well crafted for the meaning of your poem. Congrats on your win, Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:07:00 AM

Arlene, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2016 11:49:00 AM

- So many options, great written Arlene - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/16/2016 5:09:00 PM

Yes it does, it always seems to bend. Really soothing, Arlene. Very reflecting and optimistic.