Arlene Smith Poet Monoku

Sweet River of Dreams

Lost in lazy haze, floating past reality. sweet river of dreams
Worlds known just to me, break the surface of my mind. dark, murky waters
New escapes await. Drifting without pause or cause. River makes a bend.


 2/16/2016
Contest: River of Dreams
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Rhoma Em February 22, 2016 at 2:00 PM Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 10:27 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Arlene..

Sam Jameson February 21, 2016 at 7:20 PM congratulations Arlene :)

Vladislav Raven February 21, 2016 at 6:56 PM Hi Arlene, Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest. I enjoyed the read.

Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 2:18 PM Congratulations!

Paul Callus February 21, 2016 at 2:00 PM Very beautiful, Arlene; truly a river of dreams; the ending 'bend' is so expressive. Congratulations on placing first! // paul

Eve Roper February 21, 2016 at 11:13 AM Exquisite write :-) congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Timothy Hicks February 21, 2016 at 10:16 AM Ahhh the unpredictable bending river. Naturally free-flowing --- life can sometimes be like this. Congrats on your high placement in this contest!

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2016 at 10:14 AM oh that last part was so well crafted for the meaning of your poem. Congrats on your win, Arlene

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:07 AM Arlene, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2016 at 11:49 AM - So many options, great written Arlene - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner February 16, 2016 at 5:09 PM Yes it does, it always seems to bend. Really soothing, Arlene. Very reflecting and optimistic.