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Sweet Rewards

covered with fake smiles
trying to get sweet rewards
hiding behind lies












For Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Mick Talbot
August 1, 2018

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Susan Gentry

August 6, 2018 at 10:55 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Eve Roper

August 5, 2018 at 2:40 PM

Bank with big congratulations. Hugs Eve

Mark Toney

August 4, 2018 at 2:35 PM

Congratulations on your win, Nayda. You need to stay away from those "fake smiles" folks!

Line Gauthier

August 3, 2018 at 10:40 PM

Well done, Nayda. Congrats on your top win.

Sandra Haight

August 3, 2018 at 7:08 PM

A good one, Nayda! Fake never works. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

August 3, 2018 at 2:47 PM

Congrats for your win, Nayda. I can't stand "fake"

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 3, 2018 at 1:16 PM

Back with congrats! :)) xomo!

Augustus Black

August 3, 2018 at 12:30 PM

You've expressed a great reality in this short version. Absolutely beautiful to read. Congratulation ....

Sand Blown

August 1, 2018 at 10:41 PM

you were laughing to yourself when you wrote that, right?

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 1, 2018 at 9:55 PM

Oh the mean girls and boys. Shivers down my spine ;) Good one!

Eve Roper

August 1, 2018 at 8:35 PM

Your senryu is very harsh on people, Nayda, I hope this is not the fact in real life.. Bless you with lots of happiness. Hugs Eve

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