Sweet Pain

Deep into my heart
A pain  so sweet and dulcet
Un traced but delicate

And over my eyes
A flow gentle in full glow
Marking Ah!my ail

And some folds of love
Like a virgin waiting for
The beloved's cozy arms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 29, 2013 at 5:16 AM
The subtle metaphorical twist is awesome finer in this poem i enjoyd readin. Pls do review mine too.
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