Sweet Pain

Walking with your soul and body, 
		Your arms against
	The wind, your eyes close, your mouth opens
		Letting the sound of your soul takes over
			The ocean in blue. 

Crashing your flesh against the ironed ship,
I feel it like a stormy anchor deep
			The lotus swamp of this so-called love in despair! 

Who is the man with whom you 
Have seen beyond the sea where your desires melting?
Who is the man where the rights 
		Are just the virginal shore I taken and enjoy?
	The devil's reply with charming and roaring eyes!
			Oh, love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Thieleke Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Beautifully written. Very different way of expressing the feeling.. i love it. hello there you nice to meet you .
Zamalea Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Kimmy, How much I appreciated your comments and help me to move on? A lot! And my feedback on your poem it has been on your remarkable expression! Thanks!
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