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Sweet Mothers

Sweet super mothers with magic powerS Women of worth, patience of a willoW Exceptionally empathetic, their depths inconceivablE Entitled to glory, under their feet paradisE Tireless, serene bliss on their faces brighT Maternal affection radiating from warm bosoM Oozing remarkable humility, denying the egO Treasure of lore and wisdom, an art of the hearT Homage paid to sweet mothers of eartH Epitome of devotion, endurance and guidancE Root of all foundations, souls of grandeuR Sowers of beauty, sweet super motherS. * A double Acrostic poem.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/22/2020 1:10:00 PM

What a wonderful tribute to mothers - the best of the best anywhere on this planet couldn't describe a mother with so much warmth, integrity, love gentleness and the soul and heart of lioness. Be blessed my dear friend Besma - let your quill spill ink for all to see. Hugs, love Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/26/2020 5:09:00 PM

You are overwhelming me with your kindness, sweetness and generosity, dear Jenny! Your beautiful words I highly value and cherish deep into my heart.. thank you so much for filling my soul with Love and beauty.. Best regards. Love and hugs.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/6/2020 7:46:00 PM

Cool, well done! I hope you will consider writing a piece for my current contest.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/8/2020 2:06:00 PM

I would like to.. What is happening right now to Humanity.. to the whole world.. in America speaks with bitter pain to the heart before the mind.. no brush could help not to paint its portraits.. no pen could remain dormant.. it is my immense pleasure and honour, Richard.. thank you so much for the delight and honour of your visit.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 6/6/2020 8:25:00 AM

You did this double acrostic very well.. mothers are very precious and your poem highlights that..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/6/2020 4:04:00 PM

What I of words write couldn't meet the mothers inestimable value and beauty.. thank you so much, Silent One, for appreciating my humble work.. my honour and delight.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/4/2020 10:11:00 PM

You have captured the heart of a mother in your beautiful acrostic, Besma, and I love the painting! I find the double acrostic to be a difficult form, but yours flows effortlessly. :) Rhonda xx

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/5/2020 4:29:00 PM

And I'm so glad I have captured your beautiful soul with my humble work! And so pleased reading your honouring and elating feedback! Thank you so much dear Rhonda.. my warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/4/2020 12:28:00 PM

What a sweet, tender loving tribute to mothers worldwide Besma my friend - your mother is looking down on you with such pride and she is your guardian angel as we all have that have lost moms or lucky enough to still have them. Blessings and hugs dear friend. Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/5/2020 4:13:00 PM

You always amaze with your so wonderful and warm comments on my humble poetry, dearest Jenny! So grateful! So touched! How can I meet such beauty, soul sister! Thank you so much for your sweet and generous presence, I'm greatly pleased.. my warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/4/2020 11:26:00 AM

A beautiful tribute to mothers Besma, your words discribe them perfectly, Those double acrostics are tricky to write but you've done so with ease. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/5/2020 4:07:00 PM

So blessed to receive such a rewarding feedback! Thank you so much, Tom for your genuine care and great support! I do highly appreciate.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/4/2020 10:35:00 AM

What a lovely tribute you wrote to all mothers! I admire your creativity--how well you executed this double acrostic poem. So many lines enshrine the mothers:..Treasure of lore and wisdom, an art of the hearT...Epitome of devotion, endurance and guidancE..Well done, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/5/2020 3:56:00 PM

Deeply grateful to you, dear Vijay for always being here to kindly read my humble poetry and generously write your sincere and uplifting feedback.. thank you so much! Deepest regards and blessings.