Sweet Lies and Alibis

I kept drinking in the words from your lips 
Over and over again I kept taking sips 

Your utterances I gobbled up and ate every crumb
The taste was so sweet I licked my fingers and thumb 

For your words I had a voracious appetite 
I was gluttonous for what you had to recite 

What you verbalized never satisfied my hunger and thirst 
To me it didn't matter if they had all been rehearsed 

I was unconcerned that what you spoke were alibis 
I couldn't get enough of your sweet little lies 


6/24/2016 for Sweet Little Lies contest  sponsored by Silent One
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Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Clever and fun, congrats.
Saputo Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Blessings to you! :)
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July 10, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Blessings to you! :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:28 PM
:D This is so true in some relationships...Well done!Sunita.
Saputo Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Yes! Some people would rather hear lies than the truth. Thanks for the kind comment! Many Blessings to you! :)
Scars Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Christine, Congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
Saputo Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you so much! Peace and Blessings! :)
Ashe Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:11 PM
With this write you have nailed it's title right on the head! Each couplet elevates the previous one! The very best to you in this contest Christine! Bless you! :-)
Saputo Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Thanks for your kind comment Walter! And as always God Bless! :)
De Burca Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Great poem and good luck in the comp.
Saputo Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it! Many Blessings! :)
Turner Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 5:18 PM
I like it! Good luck in contest, Christine.
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June 26, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thank you! Glad you liked it! Blessings and Peace! :)
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