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Sweet Lies and Alibis

I kept drinking in the words from your lips Over and over again I kept taking sips Your utterances I gobbled up and ate every crumb The taste was so sweet I licked my fingers and thumb For your words I had a voracious appetite I was gluttonous for what you had to recite What you verbalized never satisfied my hunger and thirst To me it didn't matter if they had all been rehearsed I was unconcerned that what you spoke were alibis I couldn't get enough of your sweet little lies 6/24/2016 for Sweet Little Lies contest sponsored by Silent One

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2016 8:26:00 AM

Clever and fun, congrats.

Christine Saputo
Date: 7/10/2016 4:07:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Blessings to you! :)

Christine Saputo
Date: 7/10/2016 4:05:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Blessings to you! :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/8/2016 11:28:00 PM

:D This is so true in some relationships...Well done!Sunita.

Christine Saputo
Date: 7/10/2016 4:04:00 PM

Yes! Some people would rather hear lies than the truth. Thanks for the kind comment! Many Blessings to you! :)

Lu Loo

Date: 7/8/2016 5:00:00 PM

Christine, Congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Christine Saputo
Date: 7/10/2016 4:01:00 PM

Thank you so much! Peace and Blessings! :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 6/27/2016 10:11:00 PM

With this write you have nailed it's title right on the head! Each couplet elevates the previous one! The very best to you in this contest Christine! Bless you! :-)

Christine Saputo
Date: 6/28/2016 7:33:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment Walter! And as always God Bless! :)

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/24/2016 7:07:00 PM

Great poem and good luck in the comp.

Christine Saputo
Date: 6/26/2016 5:08:00 PM

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it! Many Blessings! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/24/2016 5:18:00 PM

I like it! Good luck in contest, Christine.

Christine Saputo
Date: 6/26/2016 5:06:00 PM

Thank you! Glad you liked it! Blessings and Peace! :)