Sweet Ice Queen

Sweet Ice Queen
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Walking with my honey in the rain
Makes me feel alive and young again
Feeling like I'm seventeen once more
This girls a gentle creature I do adore
We met one day when she was feeding ducks at the lake
She was so pretty couldn’t help myself I did a double take
When I approached her with a smile she told me take a hike
The hot and feisty ones are the type I really like
Everywhere it seemed we kept on meeting by chance
After weeks of pleading I got her number, then asked her for a dance
With the music nice and slow, a lovely woman in my arms
I had finally broken through her shell of ice 
And she surrendered to my charms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 10:05 AM
so sweet
Bourner Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 7:47 PM
love it! keep up the excellent work! ------Ell
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:50 AM
A sweet poem .. I see u melted your ice queen after all.. a great read to start Saturday.. enjoyed Edward.. thankxxx for sharing and for your comments on my poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:03 AM
romantic story, very nice
Haick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 9:27 PM
Beautiful as the title, Edward! Well-written. Good write! Peace, Audrey
Chachere Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:48 AM
"This girls a gentle creature I do adore" beautiful write. you have quite a list in so little time! thats awesome.(: a large mind you must have -Always & Forever Lynette
Fringe Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:34 PM
Wow, this was a fun poem to read. Keep it up. Thanks for your kind words on my poem. David
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Well, I am so glad the ice queen surrendered. A very sweet tale, Edward! Keep up your writing! LUv, Andrea
Trevino Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:11 PM
that's beautiful... loved this poem
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