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Sweet Ecstasy

Her skin was white as porcelain, her eyes were emerald green She was the most alluring creature that I had ever seen. Elegant and beautiful, she exuded style and grace Fragile as a butterfly, and as delicate as lace. She came to me at night, as I lay on my bed She promised I was hers forever, I loved every word she said. Immortality was ours, she whispered in my ear If I gave myself to her, eternity was near. How could I resist her, my heart she set aflame, Oh how sweet the ecstasy, As she bit into my vein.

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Date: 7/2/2018 12:22:00 PM
Gary.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...
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Date: 11/7/2016 8:59:00 AM
Really nicely done. This flowed smoothly and the rhymes were spot on. I always enjoy an ending that catches me off guard.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/7/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Chris.

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