Sweet Dreams

with her toddler lisp sister tangles lullabies baby brother yawns 11/4/2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2021 3:31:00 PM

also sweet. Precious!!!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/9/2021 5:32:00 PM

Thank you Andrea :)--ps

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:01:00 AM

Aww…the innocence of it all. At my nephew’s funeral found out that his mom made up a song just for him. His brother and sister would quiet him with this lullaby and surely he hears it in heaven. God bless ~

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/7/2021 7:52:00 AM

Struggling to respond, Kim. That is beautiful and heartbreaking. Heaven truly is the only comfort for such a devastating loss. <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2021 10:27:00 AM

Thweet dreams, I guess. Cute one, P.S. Thleep thoundly. :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/5/2021 11:28:00 AM

Tank oo :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/5/2021 3:28:00 AM

A lovely image PS, nothing sweeter than to hear the sound of children singing. Tom

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/5/2021 6:14:00 AM

That is true! This granddaughter sings all the time. She learns songs quickly and makes up a few of her own :)

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 11/4/2021 6:31:00 PM

A result!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/4/2021 7:21:00 PM

Yes, her singing is effective :)