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Make It Two, Please Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Written 10/6/2025

SWEET DAYBREAK

All is watching black velvet night, 
A smile wide with the gift of light.
Rekindling the golds of dawn. 
A yawn, weaving death and the 
Rebirth of shadows of hope. 
SWEET scent of DAYBREAK.
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 3:10 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "SWEET DAYBREAK" write again. Have a Blessed day writing away..........
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:56 AM
The yawn line is so cool. Congratulations in the contest
Gasun Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations on your win and this stunning work my dear poet friend Eve! Thanks a lot for sharing this precious gem and your superb talent! God bless you always and your poetry! Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 3:48 AM
You still have the knack of writing beautiful poems. Best for a win.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:04 PM
outstanding imagery in this contest entry. Loved it! best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:57 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "SWEET DAYBREAK" write. "Good Luck" Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Sharma Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 11:46 AM
A lovely day to look forward to indeed!!
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 11:26 AM
- "A smile wide with the gift of light" ... beautiful, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Meadows Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Beautiful!!
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