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Sweet Danger

I remember the eve of ripening masculinity The frenzied feelings so easy to ignite The naive assumption of life to infinity The wondrous things yet to incite I remember a time when what mattered was little At least to my limited knowledge of being When innocence and passion allowed such acquittal For a time, though soon I would see it fleeing I remember this fondly and clearly, it seems As I sometimes still feel the sweet danger So grateful, this gift, presented to me Those glorious days of a stranger

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Date: 10/12/2018 9:44:00 AM
You may think it odd, but it is where my brain went on the first stanza and held - young men as portrayed eager to go to war and conquer with no clue of their own limited mortality. It touches on that masculine trait I recall many teenage boys having well into their 20s. Plus their is a spice of whimsical otherness in the write that's elusive, yet palatable simultaneously. Really enjoyed your talent. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/12/2018 11:28:00 AM
Poetry hugs to you as well! Thanks CayCay!!
Date: 3/5/2018 9:08:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/5/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Kim!!
Date: 4/18/2017 1:52:00 PM
It is nice to be young again and carefree sometimes...Such a lovely poem.Welcome to ps :) Charma.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/18/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Charma
Date: 4/18/2017 1:15:00 PM
Awesome write! :) 7!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/18/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thank you!

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