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Sweet Dance

~when honey bees dance
                       waggling provocative tail…
                                     queen bee smiles sweetly

   In Honor of: `A Rambling Poet ~ 
   Haiku Me Some Nature, Please
   By John Moses Freeman

Honey Bee (Apis mellifera)
The honey bee, Apis mellifera, is one of several species of bees 
that produce honey.
 The waggle dance, an elaborate series of movements by a worker bee, 
informs other bees where the best sources of food are located.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Moses. Love, Carol
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September 5, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 8:20 PM
how cute that you used this waggle dance for your theme, john. Honey is sweet and you got a sweet poem here. Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Enjoyed your creative work..Congrats..Sara
Merryman Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Congrats on your win! I really liked this. Kim
Susan Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:25 PM
so cute! congratulations on your win :)
Minardi Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Congrats!!! This is entertaining and informative at the same time, Moses. And thanx for stopping by. :)
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Many congrats, John : )
Mehta Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest,John
Foster Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 4:32 AM
congratulations on your win here John. Clever little fellas the honey bee. enjoyed, thank you.... Marg..
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 3:24 AM
wow, moe..sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 11:22 PM
Congrats Moses on 5th place win with this stunning poetry entry my friend..luv..
Merryman Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 7:44 PM
What a picture you have painted! Cute! Sincerely, Kim
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 5:06 PM
a melody of sweet syrupy seduction, moe.. love it! winning wishes! ;) huggs, nette
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