L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Sweet Breath of Spring

Forever sacred the sweet breath of spring
Flowing in through the floral rose arbors
More fragrant on the breeze than anything,
Forever sacred the sweet breath of spring
Like notes the first May nightingale sings 
Arousing for his mate all masculine ardors,
Forever sacred the sweet breath of spring
Flowing in through the floral rose arbors. 

Written May 1, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger May 2, 2022 at 10:57 AM Your words bring such a lovely romantic feeling to spring "Like notes the first May nightingale sings Arousing for his mate all masculine ardors," L Milton Hankins May 2, 2022 at 11:47 AM I hoped they would. Thanks for your kind thoughts.

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2022 at 8:04 AM Such beauty in your amazing triolet, Milt:) L Milton Hankins May 2, 2022 at 10:48 AM Thanks so much, Jo. I love to use the triolet form whenever it seems to work well.

Judy Ball May 1, 2022 at 6:01 PM Absolutely beautiful Milton. Love it. God Bless, JB L Milton Hankins May 1, 2022 at 7:11 PM Thank you so much, Judy, for your gracious thoughts on my poem.