Sweet and Sour of Love

Lost
In a sea 
Of crimson skies
As I try to listen 
Carefully
To the mountains
Chant, in silence 
While clouds 
Teasingly
Sprinkle my whole
With its majesty 
Liquid, 
Now 
Running down 
On rosy cheeks 
And I 
Tasted the sweet 
And sour 
Of first love
Yet still 
Need to chase 
The day 
Ascending 
To the top
Where 
The glory of a 
Blood red pride 
Will be
As ultimate prize 
Awaits, for those
Who could solve 
The paradigm 
Of her life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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