Richard Ferry Poet Rhyme

Sweet and Salty

Sweet and salty      Or       Should I say        Salty and sweet        Never needed tenderizer  To soften this meat       Devouring Carmen       Down by the sea        Always a place       I wanted to be       That's  it                   Richard Ferry                                                       PS ..   Sorry I did not follow the rules

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Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 1:06 AM well, you could have followed the rules and I'd have placed it, you silly!!! I did like it , my friend, but rules is rules. heehee Richard Ferry November 9, 2013 at 10:50 PM As Anne Lise says in her comment...Rules were meant to be broken...Don`t you ever break the rules? Have a good weekend yourself Andrea At least you find my interesting...Hate to be one of the norm.....Rick..

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2013 at 5:19 PM .... some rules are to be broken :))) - Well done .... anyway Richard! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Ferry October 19, 2013 at 8:03 PM Thanks Anne....I follow your writes always. Sorry I don`t comment very much..Your work is leaps and bounds above most..Rick

Poet Destroyer A October 15, 2013 at 10:24 PM i like this... Good luck in the contest...Linda Richard Ferry October 15, 2013 at 10:52 PM Glad you like