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Sweet Agitation

petals on the breeze
butterflies on cherry blooms
fragrance and wings waft

many in the trees
so red and green and yellow
in a blue sky spring

rollicking on gusts
in the hot day of the sun
and sound waves of song
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Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Evelyn, I love the intertwining of fragrance, petals and wings. Another beauty from your pen! May God continue to bless your pen!
Buehler Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:22 AM
That's so kind of you to say, Kim. I am deeply honored by your appreciation.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:58 AM
I always admire your imagery. Your haiku are perfect. I've been trying my hand at them but yours are fabulous. ~~
Buehler Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:26 AM
It brings great joy when someone likes what I've written, so thank you for that. I have read a haiku written by you, and I was quite impressed! :=)
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