Sweet Abiding Pets

I believe in Heaven, and I believe dogs, as well as humans, go there. I had my own dog 
once upon a time, a Miniature Eskimo named Ollyver. Each night I’d find him waiting on the 
other side of the door to jump up into my arms when I came home from work. When he got 
older, I was forced to give him up, and I’d always wondered what became of him.  

One night I dreamed I awoke to find him by my pillow, staring at me with his wistful brown 
eyes. So vivid was that dream that my soul flooded with joy as I gathered him up and felt 
his soft fur against my arms and face. It was the realest dream I’d ever experienced. He 
would have been quite old by then, so I like to believe he came back that night on his way to 
Heaven to tell me goodbye. 

I imagine Ollyver, as well as my other precious deceased pet, a cat named Callie, in that 
bright new place, sitting by its Pearly gates, biding their time, waiting just for me! I hope one 
day, in the Hereafter, to gather those sweet pets of mine up into my arms! 

* This is an excerpt from a longer work which included another animal I called Church Dog, 
but I could not fit the whole narrative onto this page, so this is the part that tells about two 
pets that I lost. Andrea Dietrich

For Constance - a Rambling Poet's mini-blog contest: All Creatures Great And Small

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/28/2015 8:17:00 PM
Hello Andrea... oh this is great Andrea. We do miss the unconditional love our pets never fail to give and our love for them goes beyond death - Lindsay
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:12:00 AM
This is so sweet and so touching. I loved it!
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Date: 10/28/2010 8:53:00 AM
Wonderful write. Dogs are always a fascination for love and kindness. Your love for dog and other animals reflects very clearly in this lovely Poem. Incidentally, my wife's care and love for dogs is beyond words. She has a special quality to understand what these animals want to tell in their silent language. Even she cares for street dogs, if they are crying or hungry. Enjoyed your lovely Poem my friend. Thanks for your kind comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 10/28/2010 7:49:00 AM
Pets are WONDERFUL. Did you ever wonder what a cat or dog is looking at when they stare off intently, eyes big and fixed. Maybe they see things we cannot. I like your dream mucho. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:14:00 AM
Wonderful Andrea. Dogs are rightly named 'Man's best friend', and nothing else comes close to their absolute keeness to do their very best for us. Their usefulness, loyalty, and delight at being with us, is an unexcelled joy, and I am certain that St Peter welcomes them at Heaven's door! Thanks very much for your visit and comments my dear. hicky
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:18:00 AM
I like this story...a lot. I think pets go to heaven, too. People need their pets, you know. And heaven is a happy place. By the way, I have a cat named "Callie" that is still alive...age 15. She is quite the queen of cats around here. (My cats are named: Felix, Callie, Sally, Cassie, and Sassy, the dog who things she is a cat. LOL) Thanks for sharing your "visitation" story. Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:55:00 AM
Just watched a show about a dog who waited for years for his master who died of a heart attack and I was crying my eyes out just as I am getting tears reading this. Our dog Missie comes to me once in a while in my dreams. Good luck in the contest. Luv Phyl
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:39:00 AM
Sure would love to read the whole version of this one-- and I do think that animals also get to heaven and I agree with you that Ollyver & Callie would be there to welcome you-- how sad really that you had to let go of Ollyver but he sure was lucky to have spent what amount of time he had with you -- hugs to you sweetie :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:09:00 PM
This is so sweet..I feel the same way about my pets and I know the ones I've lost are waiting for me in Heaven with my other loved ones
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:51:00 PM
Quite moving and touching Andrea for Constance's mini blog contest.. good luck my friend.. I have also entered "Animal's Ball" .. also believe pets go to a special 'heaven' where we will see them all again... amazing Narrative... luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:15:00 PM
Nice read and nice thoughts. Excellent piece.
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:30:00 PM
go to Zech:2;4 and see whos there.
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:05:00 PM
You are a very skilled writer :)
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