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Sugar is sweet But, too much of it makes you sick And may die diabetic and despondent. Love is sweet But too much of it makes you insolvent And may die too dependent. Better moderate and milder As it makes you somber But the sweetest word ever Is LOVING YOU forever!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/20/2012 11:11:00 AM
and it's always GREAT to see you back!
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:10:00 AM
AWWWW, it is SWEET!!! Too bad you didn't get it into that "sweet" contest they just had.
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Date: 7/20/2012 9:14:00 AM
SWEET!!!!....nice one here Dalila...enjoyed.
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:29:00 AM
Yes.....sweet....sweet ...Loveing you forever - Like it a lot, thank you for written it and sharing Dalila. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:28:00 AM
sweet write
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