Dalila Agtani Poet Rhyme

Sweet

Sugar is sweet
But, too much of it makes you sick
And may die diabetic and despondent.

Love is sweet
But too much of it makes you insolvent
And may die too dependent.

Better moderate and milder
As it makes you somber
But the sweetest word ever 
Is LOVING YOU  forever!

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Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2012 at 11:11 AM and it's always GREAT to see you back!

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2012 at 11:10 AM AWWWW, it is SWEET!!! Too bad you didn't get it into that "sweet" contest they just had.

Jonas L. Rozario July 20, 2012 at 9:14 AM SWEET!!!!....nice one here Dalila...enjoyed.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2012 at 3:29 AM Yes.....sweet....sweet ...Loveing you forever - Like it a lot, thank you for written it and sharing Dalila. - oxox Anne-Lise

Mad Hu July 20, 2012 at 3:28 AM sweet write