Sweat

The mind goes round in circles
Whispering some secret sound
No relief is to be found
No relief is to be found

Loneliness is sweet, sweet pain
Therein bathe the heart
Oh, hopeless lost unfortunate soul
Waiting for another start

Left or right,
Nothing in-between
No struggles in illusions
No stress and no confusions
Nothing in-between
Day or night

Sweat,
Let the juice of life be clean again
Sweat,
Go back to when it all began

JvN 10.12.2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 15, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Mortiz,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 2, 2015 at 11:10 PM
MORITZ, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
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