Sweat

SWEAT
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HIS ALL ALONG THE BODY IS WITH FULL OF SWEAT
SHE LOVES HIM AND KISSED HIM 
HIS SWEATTING IS FROM HIS WORK
SHE LOVES HIM AS APART FROM THE WORDS
HER FOOD AND DRESS IS FROM THAT MANLY SWEAT
HER SAREE ENDS ARE WAITTING TO TOUCH UP HIS FACE
HER HANDS ARE ALSO WAITTING TO HIM
SHE IS HIS BETTER HALF OFCOURSE|

ABI SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN  MA PGDCA   INDIAN ENGLISH POET
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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September 22, 2024 at 10:30 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Abi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 29, 2015 at 8:08 PM
ABI SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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