Swear To You 2-24-10

dont worry, 
just calm me down, 
show me sunshine and take away this frown, 
dry my tears, 
till i can see you again, 
before my heart breaks, 
and im dead...
remember always, 
my love is true, 
because forever, 
i swear ill love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 29, 2010 at 7:48 AM
You see even on a short poem you have no need for long words . This has a flow from start to end . I can read it without being stuck.
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 3:02 PM
really a great use of rhyme and just a solid write in ery sense of the word great poen keep writting
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 9:03 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Rain. Love, Carol
Palli Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 10:45 AM
so romantic
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