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Swaying On a Gypsy Wind

Within a lush verdant meadow there meanders a docile stream where wildflowers profusely bloom beneath the warm breath of the sun. They sway on whispers of a gypsy wind as it gently drifts across this Elysian field. March 5, 2022 Bite Size Poem No.38 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 9:20:00 PM

Charming imagery ~

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/6/2022 8:21:00 PM

You have a magical way with words, Jenna, awesome:)

John Watt

Date: 3/5/2022 5:57:00 PM

Jenna, this brings together such wondrous aspects of the outdoors with the gentle waters, wind, sun, meadow, and flowers all painting a tapestry of tranquility. I love "this Elysian field" you write of (and such an amazing photo you shared!) Let me know when you three are heading over and I'll bring some sandwiches and cider for your picnic ;^)

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/5/2022 6:01:00 PM

The more the merrier holds true, John. Please come along. I’m always delighted to read your commentaries! Thank you for reading me. ;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/5/2022 8:58:00 AM

Count me in Jenna, save me a slice, you paint a very tranquil place with your words. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/5/2022 9:28:00 AM

You're in, Tom. Thank you for such sweet remarks.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/5/2022 8:32:00 AM

Lovely, peaceful lines with fine imagery. I can imagine visiting this docile stream and feeling so relaxed. Thanks for sharing, Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/5/2022 8:35:00 AM

We'll have a picnic lunch near the waterfall... beneath the shade of a pine. I made an apple pie for dessert. Let's find this spot! Thanks, Milt.