Swaying On a Gypsy Wind

Within a lush verdant meadow
there meanders a docile stream
where wildflowers profusely bloom 
beneath the warm breath of the sun.
They sway on whispers of a gypsy wind 
as it gently drifts across this Elysian field.



March 5, 2022
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Date: 11/10/2022 9:20:00 PM
Charming imagery ~
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Date: 3/6/2022 8:21:00 PM
You have a magical way with words, Jenna, awesome:)
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Date: 3/5/2022 5:57:00 PM
Jenna, this brings together such wondrous aspects of the outdoors with the gentle waters, wind, sun, meadow, and flowers all painting a tapestry of tranquility. I love "this Elysian field" you write of (and such an amazing photo you shared!) Let me know when you three are heading over and I'll bring some sandwiches and cider for your picnic ;^)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/5/2022 6:01:00 PM
The more the merrier holds true, John. Please come along. I’m always delighted to read your commentaries! Thank you for reading me. ;)
Date: 3/5/2022 8:58:00 AM
Count me in Jenna, save me a slice, you paint a very tranquil place with your words. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/5/2022 9:28:00 AM
You're in, Tom. Thank you for such sweet remarks.
Date: 3/5/2022 8:32:00 AM
Lovely, peaceful lines with fine imagery. I can imagine visiting this docile stream and feeling so relaxed. Thanks for sharing, Jenna.
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Date: 3/5/2022 8:35:00 AM
We'll have a picnic lunch near the waterfall... beneath the shade of a pine. I made an apple pie for dessert. Let's find this spot! Thanks, Milt.
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