Swaying On a Gypsy Wind

Within a lush verdant meadow
there meanders a docile stream
where wildflowers profusely bloom 
beneath the warm breath of the sun.
They sway on whispers of a gypsy wind 
as it gently drifts across this Elysian field.



March 5, 2022
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Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 9:20 PM
Charming imagery ~
Daniel Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 8:21 PM
You have a magical way with words, Jenna, awesome:)
Watt Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 5:57 PM
Jenna, this brings together such wondrous aspects of the outdoors with the gentle waters, wind, sun, meadow, and flowers all painting a tapestry of tranquility. I love "this Elysian field" you write of (and such an amazing photo you shared!) Let me know when you three are heading over and I'll bring some sandwiches and cider for your picnic ;^)
Logan Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 6:01 PM
The more the merrier holds true, John. Please come along. I’m always delighted to read your commentaries! Thank you for reading me. ;)
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Count me in Jenna, save me a slice, you paint a very tranquil place with your words. Tom
Logan Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 9:28 AM
You're in, Tom. Thank you for such sweet remarks.
Hankins Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Lovely, peaceful lines with fine imagery. I can imagine visiting this docile stream and feeling so relaxed. Thanks for sharing, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 8:35 AM
We'll have a picnic lunch near the waterfall... beneath the shade of a pine. I made an apple pie for dessert. Let's find this spot! Thanks, Milt.
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