Swaying In the Breeze

a dark purple sky branches swaying in the breeze the storms are brewing
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 10:27 AM
lovely haiku, Russell
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Great if we could get the cool of clouds and a really great shower to cool off the whole US without the damage of a storm..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...It is still hot here but the temperature is a little lower today than earlier this week...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Love the imagery, Russell.
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July 7, 2012 at 10:36 PM
Ominous! Fantastic imagery... perfect 575 meter! Well done, Russ!! Keith.
Grisetti Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 8:32 PM
And then they come to FL. Nice haiku with great images.
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July 7, 2012 at 7:15 PM
‡ And I Feel As Though Dorothy Gale Holding Tightly Toto * There's No Place Home *.* My Luv, Rachel ‡
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