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Swaying In the Breeze

a dark purple sky branches swaying in the breeze the storms are brewing
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 10:27:00 AM
lovely haiku, Russell
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Date: 7/8/2012 12:24:00 PM
Great if we could get the cool of clouds and a really great shower to cool off the whole US without the damage of a storm..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...It is still hot here but the temperature is a little lower today than earlier this week...Sara
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Date: 7/8/2012 11:54:00 AM
Love the imagery, Russell.
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Date: 7/7/2012 10:36:00 PM
Ominous! Fantastic imagery... perfect 575 meter! Well done, Russ!! Keith.
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Date: 7/7/2012 8:32:00 PM
And then they come to FL. Nice haiku with great images.
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Date: 7/7/2012 7:15:00 PM
‡ And I Feel As Though Dorothy Gale Holding Tightly Toto * There's No Place Home *.* My Luv, Rachel ‡
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