Swans Wings Haiku

Silk angel eyes dance

Sailing on a pearl swans wings

Trees shadow the lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Eileen, that last line seals it off nicely and it is winning. Nice job in this demanding form! Thanks and regards Gerard
Duffin Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:54 AM
Hi Swans on the lakes in Tramore this morning. Another mind opener. Eamon
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