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Written - 16th September 2023 

 

Swans Lake Sate

Swans so gracefully gliding o'er lake Delightful scenery they create Dressed all in white feather finery True beauties of the lake dynasty. Falling in love with love forever Swan mates dance on water together Singing a swan lake song as they roam The glorious lake they've made their home. When swans in love kiss with a beak peck A heart shape appears betwixt their necks A smaller vision between the eyes Romanticism in lake's paradise. Swans raise their precious baby cygnets Till they've grown to become strong and fit Off to their own world they glide away The circle of life in a relay. Elegant they live, with poise they die On angelic wings away they fly Then when they've entered through heaven's gate Swans will sage nirvana with lake sate.
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Meadows Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 12:47 AM
A beautiful description of the swans. Such a lovely poem. Well written.
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November 16, 2023 at 12:42 AM
Hope you have a good day. Look at to reading more of your poems.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 3:19 AM
Thank you so much Jeanette, that’s music to my heart. Blessings, Belle
Empress Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 3:13 AM
How beautiful is this write! Just magical and dreamy, made me dream away and see this scene where swan mates dance on water and a heart shape appears, how romantic and passionate is this creatively crafted write: i also love the alliterations, and the way you’ve phrased your words and delivered imagery is so fairytale like! One of my faves definitely! Absolutely stunning and soul warming: goodluck for the contest
Edmonds  Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Sorry I missed this Ink, thank you for the wonderful review I truly appreciate every word … Belle
Romios Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Best wishes in the contest. It is so you, Belle, Beautifully buoyant)))) Pangie xx
Edmonds  Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Thank you Pangie, I so appreciate that. Belle xx
Sharma  Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Oh my, this is such a beautiful 'swan-world' you've illustrated with the magic of your eloquent words here.. I'm swirling in the spellbinding and whimsical aura of your resplendent rhymes and the gorgeousness of every line.. "When swans in love kiss with a beak peck, A heart shape appears between their necks" I absolutely love how you've described that, so profound and breathtaking! Truly enjoyed reading this, sending love- :)
Edmonds  Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Hi Hiya, to say I’m delighted with your awesome review would be an understatement, I’m on cloud nine. Thank you so much, sending love back in return -:) Belle
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