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Swan Song

Graceful swan, high glide His frozen lake, below spied Splashdown? No... slip, slide

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Date: 2/12/2021 3:53:00 AM
Lovely haiku... God bless you with many more. With love, Gina
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/12/2021 4:57:00 AM
Thanks Regina. Not really my style but thought I’d have a go. Terry
Date: 2/10/2021 10:47:00 AM
Lovely winter image Terry, could just imagine the scene, a camera moment captured in your haiku. Tom
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Date: 2/10/2021 11:26:00 AM
Had a browse through some of the senryu valentines contest winners (including your own) and it put me in the mood to give it a go. Glad you liked my experimental effort. Terry

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