Swan Song

Graceful swan, high glide His frozen lake, below spied Splashdown? No... slip, slide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcintosh Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 3:53 AM
Lovely haiku... God bless you with many more. With love, Gina
Flood Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Thanks Regina. Not really my style but thought I’d have a go. Terry
Cunningham Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Lovely winter image Terry, could just imagine the scene, a camera moment captured in your haiku. Tom
Flood Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Had a browse through some of the senryu valentines contest winners (including your own) and it put me in the mood to give it a go. Glad you liked my experimental effort. Terry
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