Swan Lake Sky

fantasia of clouds pirouetting across skies toe shoes, blue in hue 12/6/2020

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John Watt

Date: 12/6/2020 7:45:00 PM

Love the image of clouds pirouetting across the skies like ballet dancer. The word 'fantasia' is such a rich word, too - makes a great start for this haiku. Pure delight. ~ John

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/6/2020 11:03:00 PM

John....thanks... Eddie played baseball on a professional size field today. My daughter said he die extremely well. He pitched all innings and at great lengths. Fantasia yeses. A great name. Thank you, Pangie xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/6/2020 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful Poem! :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/6/2020 1:18:00 PM

Heidi, glad you got this. Pangie,xx Happy Holidays!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/6/2020 7:42:00 AM

A nice summer image, no chance here today, gloomy and dark, like the end of the world. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/6/2020 7:57:00 AM

Yikes, sorry Tom. I see it in my mind. California's sunny but overcast. Winters in Chicago, like you describe,ugh. From Pangie