Swan Lake Sky

fantasia of clouds
                 pirouetting across skies
                 toe shoes, blue in hue 
  

                      12/6/2020
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Watt Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Love the image of clouds pirouetting across the skies like ballet dancer. The word 'fantasia' is such a rich word, too - makes a great start for this haiku. Pure delight. ~ John
Romios Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 11:03 PM
John....thanks... Eddie played baseball on a professional size field today. My daughter said he die extremely well. He pitched all innings and at great lengths. Fantasia yeses. A great name. Thank you, Pangie xx
Sands Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Beautiful Poem! :)
Romios Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Heidi, glad you got this. Pangie,xx Happy Holidays!
Cunningham Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:42 AM
A nice summer image, no chance here today, gloomy and dark, like the end of the world. Tom
Romios Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Yikes, sorry Tom. I see it in my mind. California's sunny but overcast. Winters in Chicago, like you describe,ugh. From Pangie
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