Swan Dance

Spring time there’s activity at the lake they’re so elegant no one can emulate, go down see a beautiful phenomenon the mating game of the whooper swan, Take your partner turn left then right bend forward until your heads out of sight, flap your arms backward then forward stretch neck, turn head, look skyward, glide across floor like swans on water as mating game gets much, much hotter, partners look into each others bright eyes look other way then back admire the prize, kiss one another gently on each cheek as our swans do with their yellow beak, step back, bow, turn left then right again Wiggle as if standing in the pouring rain, unlike us, swans take a mate for life beautiful birds, inspirational wildlife, immaculate plumage so white so clean love how they attract, how they preen. Take your partner, turn right then left relax, enjoy a hug that’s not bereft , interlock hands, bend up and down let go, bow, slowly slowly spin around, face each other, then both together bend over and shake a tail feather, so now we’re at the dances ending thank each other for beautiful dancing. 5/10/2018 Contest a new dance explained Sponsored by Brenda Chiri. (Genre classic country)

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/14/2018 11:14:00 AM

Oh how beautiful you did this!! I couldn't figure out how even to start writing a dance. Congratulations on your top win! Smiled all the way thru this.

Roy Pett
Date: 6/14/2018 1:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Susan, I believe you could compose any form on any theme as you are very talented as well as too kind, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/9/2018 11:05:00 PM

What a lovely and elegant write, Roy Congrats on your top win.

Roy Pett
Date: 6/10/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Line, I got a lot of enjoyment writing this so over the moon that it got placed, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/11/2018 6:21:00 AM

This is so creative and fun! A beautiful, well written poem :) Good luck in the contest !

Roy Pett
Date: 5/11/2018 6:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Heidi, thanks again for your support support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Carole Duet

Date: 5/11/2018 12:55:00 AM

What a delightful poem and a delight to read.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/10/2018 11:53:00 PM

Very clever and funny, Roy. "unlike us, swans take a mate for life" powerful statement in this tender piece.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/11/2018 5:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Daniel, so pleased you like this and saw the humorous side to it, I hope the statement is correct as I tend to write things that come to mind, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2018 6:42:00 PM

oh how cutely you did that contest, Roy. I am not sure I understand how to make up my own dance, but I like how you used the tail feather in here. I once square danced, so many years ago. Loved it. I wonder if they ever used that expression in square dancing, to shake your tail feathers!!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/11/2018 5:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Andrea, I am sure you could produce poetry in any form you are so talented, I have probably heard this expression before in my distant past but not sure where, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/10/2018 5:15:00 PM

This definitely is a unique take on the contest. I enjoyed reading this fun poem Roy..quite original and innovative..a winning entry!

Roy Pett
Date: 5/10/2018 5:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, really pleased that you see the humour, hope Brenda does also, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))