Swamp

murky water hinders view

vegetation overruns shore

crocodiles lay in wait



                    P.R.Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 10, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Pam, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~
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May 11, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Thank you very much.
A  Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 2:59 AM
PAM, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
Deremer Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Thank you very much.
Sutton Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 2:06 PM
GREAT HAIKU!
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May 4, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Thank you very much.
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April 28, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:11 PM
NICE ONE
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April 28, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Thank you.
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