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swallowtail unseen amidst pungent garden green whilst darkness hardens 1/31/2020 Poetry Contest: Strict Haiku Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 2/24/2020 5:08:00 AM
Congratulations. Well done.
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Date: 2/4/2020 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with this lovely haiku Eve! xxoo
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Date: 2/3/2020 11:06:00 AM
i love butterflies...so unique and beautiful... great haiku...congrats on your win.... hugs
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Date: 2/2/2020 10:59:00 PM
Such exquisite imagery Eve, congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:33:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2020 9:33:00 AM
What a. Cool way to describe the coming night with darkness hardens. Congrats, eve.
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Date: 2/2/2020 8:09:00 AM
Very nice. Great last line,congrats-Peter
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Date: 2/1/2020 11:13:00 PM
Poetic beauty..Congrats on your fantastic win Eve..
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Date: 1/31/2020 3:15:00 PM
Nature at its best--and you captured it succinctly, Eve in just a few words--with the eye of an artist--which you certainly are!
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Date: 1/31/2020 2:55:00 PM
Lovely hakiu Eve, love the pic too. Good luck Tom
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Date: 1/31/2020 1:26:00 PM
This was beautiful Eve. made it feel like springtime. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 1/31/2020 1:17:00 PM
- A beautiful haiku, Eve - ( A rare butterfly ? ) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:39:00 PM
Gorgeous image and imagery eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
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