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Swallowtail Butterfly Scatter Amid Garden

swallowtail unseen
amidst pungent garden green
whilst darkness hardens



1/31/2020


Poetry Contest: Strict Haiku  
Sponsored by: William Kekaula

butterflygardennighthaiku

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Kai Michael Neumann

February 24, 2020 at 5:08 AM

Congratulations. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong

February 4, 2020 at 12:22 AM

Congratulations on your first place win with this lovely haiku Eve! xxoo

Sandra Adams

February 3, 2020 at 11:06 AM

i love butterflies...so unique and beautiful... great haiku...congrats on your win.... hugs

Ann Gilmour

February 2, 2020 at 10:59 PM

Such exquisite imagery Eve, congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 2, 2020 at 12:33 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2020 at 9:33 AM

What a. Cool way to describe the coming night with darkness hardens. Congrats, eve.

Peter W Iversen

February 2, 2020 at 8:09 AM

Very nice. Great last line,congrats-Peter

Jenish Somadas

February 1, 2020 at 11:13 PM

Poetic beauty..Congrats on your fantastic win Eve..

Vijay Pandit

January 31, 2020 at 3:15 PM

Nature at its best--and you captured it succinctly, Eve in just a few words--with the eye of an artist--which you certainly are!

Tom Cunningham

January 31, 2020 at 2:55 PM

Lovely hakiu Eve, love the pic too. Good luck Tom

Chris Green

January 31, 2020 at 1:26 PM

This was beautiful Eve. made it feel like springtime. Best wishes in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2020 at 1:17 PM

- A beautiful haiku, Eve - ( A rare butterfly ? ) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

January 31, 2020 at 12:39 PM

Gorgeous image and imagery eve:-) Hugs Jan xx

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