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Swallows

the swallows soaring
close under dark storm nimbus
while others cower

9 December 2019

birdhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

December 12, 2019 at 3:22 PM

very nice, Geoffrey, and congratulations

Geoffrey Brewer

December 19, 2019 at 5:22 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Peter W Iversen

December 11, 2019 at 10:36 AM

Great image, congrats

Geoffrey Brewer

December 19, 2019 at 5:22 PM

Thank you, Peter

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 10, 2019 at 1:09 PM

Birds of paradise, unafraid to take a dark knight flight ... Golden ink wings of a valorous write, Geoffrey! A stunningly beautiful haiku, very thoughtfully expressed. Love and best wishes for the holidays.

Geoffrey Brewer

December 19, 2019 at 5:19 PM

Thank you very much for your kind and beautifully expressed comments, Freddie.