Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Swallowed By the Moon

*Super Moon 3/20/19


I was swallowed by the moon
Its brightness captured me
It hadn’t come too soon
Needing light to consume me
And so it did, from a dark winter night
My soul moved to and fro
With its endless moon path in sight
Glimmering all over the snow
Nothing but a lift, pulled me above
From the place where I stood
Igniting my heart with love
Like nothing else could

Heidi Sands

3/21/19

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Quoth Theraven March 30, 2021 at 8:01 PM Hello Heidi, Fine lines from a better time. 'pulled me above ~~ From the place where I stood' all this said without haste or regret in a winter night, swallowed by the moon. So wonderful to find this one on a weary weeknight. -Richard Heidi Sands March 31, 2021 at 5:07 AM Hi Richard. I hope everything is ok? (from a weary weeknight) Feel free to soupmail me. Thank you very much for your kind visits and to my older poetry :)

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2019 at 3:07 PM Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! Heidi Sands April 12, 2019 at 7:28 PM Thank you so much Richard. It is nice to see your comment this evening :)

Joseph May April 8, 2019 at 12:55 PM A beautiful moonlit night..Wonderful write Heidi Heidi Sands April 8, 2019 at 4:51 PM Thank you Joseph. It was beautiful :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 31, 2019 at 7:04 PM Helo Heidi, this is a beautiful poem about the moon. have a nice evening my friend. Heidi Sands April 1, 2019 at 10:55 AM Thank you Darlene :) I hope all is well !

Gordon Mcconnell March 29, 2019 at 11:12 AM Such a lovely penned piece Heidi, really fine write full of great imagery and fine rhyme. Blessings, Gordon Heidi Sands March 29, 2019 at 1:12 PM Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your kind comment on this. Bless you :)

Caren Krutsinger March 23, 2019 at 9:06 PM The last two lines was enough by themselves to make my heart sing. Heidi Sands March 23, 2019 at 9:13 PM Your comments and feedback have been so nice to read tonight. Thank you. I am grateful :) Goodight.

Ann Gilmour March 23, 2019 at 4:00 AM Your imagery is stunning Heidi as I too have been swallowed by your beautiful Moon poem. Thank you Heidi, with kindest moon beam thoughts Ann xx Heidi Sands March 23, 2019 at 9:39 AM Thank you very much Ann! I appreciate your kind comment. Tonight, the Northern Lights will be showing in our area! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2019 at 7:57 AM - A lovely image, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands March 22, 2019 at 10:01 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) Have a nice day!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. March 21, 2019 at 4:56 PM Very nice poen Heidi Sands March 21, 2019 at 5:30 PM Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit March 21, 2019 at 3:40 PM It was a joyous moment..you captured it well! Heidi Sands March 21, 2019 at 4:52 PM It was! Thank you Vijay :) Have a nice evening.

Eve Roper March 21, 2019 at 1:23 PM great imagery, Heidi. Hugs Eve ~`* Heidi Sands March 21, 2019 at 2:48 PM Thank you Eve :)

Winged Warrior March 21, 2019 at 12:17 PM Swallowed by your verse...lovely write Heidi...a Fav my friend...love & light...^WW^...{*J*} Heidi Sands March 21, 2019 at 12:35 PM Thank you so much WW. I appreciate you considering it a FAV :) Love & Light!

Demetrios Trifiatis March 21, 2019 at 10:55 AM Magical phenomenon depicted in a magical poem dearest, Heidi! A fav! Heidi Sands March 21, 2019 at 12:34 PM Thank you so much Demetrios. I am happy you consider it a Fav. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 21, 2019 at 10:24 AM Enchanted! Fantastic piece Heidi. xomo Heidi Sands March 21, 2019 at 10:31 AM Thank you very much Maureen :) Have a great day!