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Swallowed By the Moon

*Super Moon 3/20/19


I was swallowed by the moon
Its brightness captured me
It hadn’t come too soon
Needing light to consume me
And so it did, from a dark winter night
My soul moved to and fro
With its endless moon path in sight
Glimmering all over the snow
Nothing but a lift, pulled me above
From the place where I stood
Igniting my heart with love
Like nothing else could

Heidi Sands

3/21/19

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Quoth Theraven Date: 3/30/2021 8:01:00 PM Hello Heidi, Fine lines from a better time. 'pulled me above ~~ From the place where I stood' all this said without haste or regret in a winter night, swallowed by the moon. So wonderful to find this one on a weary weeknight. -Richard Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/31/2021 5:07:00 AM Hi Richard. I hope everything is ok? (from a weary weeknight) Feel free to soupmail me. Thank you very much for your kind visits and to my older poetry :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/12/2019 3:07:00 PM Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/12/2019 7:28:00 PM Thank you so much Richard. It is nice to see your comment this evening :)

Joseph May Date: 4/8/2019 12:55:00 PM A beautiful moonlit night..Wonderful write Heidi Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/8/2019 4:51:00 PM Thank you Joseph. It was beautiful :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/31/2019 7:04:00 PM Helo Heidi, this is a beautiful poem about the moon. have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/1/2019 10:55:00 AM Thank you Darlene :) I hope all is well !

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 3/29/2019 11:57:00 AM Beautiful, such deep insight. I love it, Heidi! A fave for me. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2019 1:12:00 PM Thank you very much Sandy :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/29/2019 11:12:00 AM Such a lovely penned piece Heidi, really fine write full of great imagery and fine rhyme. Blessings, Gordon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2019 1:12:00 PM Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your kind comment on this. Bless you :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/23/2019 9:06:00 PM The last two lines was enough by themselves to make my heart sing. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/23/2019 9:13:00 PM Your comments and feedback have been so nice to read tonight. Thank you. I am grateful :) Goodight.

Ann Gilmour Date: 3/23/2019 4:00:00 AM Your imagery is stunning Heidi as I too have been swallowed by your beautiful Moon poem. Thank you Heidi, with kindest moon beam thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/23/2019 9:39:00 AM Thank you very much Ann! I appreciate your kind comment. Tonight, the Northern Lights will be showing in our area! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2019 7:57:00 AM - A lovely image, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/22/2019 10:01:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) Have a nice day!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 3/21/2019 4:56:00 PM Very nice poen Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2019 5:30:00 PM Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/21/2019 3:40:00 PM It was a joyous moment..you captured it well! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2019 4:52:00 PM It was! Thank you Vijay :) Have a nice evening.

Eve Roper Date: 3/21/2019 1:23:00 PM great imagery, Heidi. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2019 2:48:00 PM Thank you Eve :)

Winged Warrior Date: 3/21/2019 12:17:00 PM Swallowed by your verse...lovely write Heidi...a Fav my friend...love & light...^WW^...{*J*} Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2019 12:35:00 PM Thank you so much WW. I appreciate you considering it a FAV :) Love & Light!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/21/2019 10:55:00 AM Magical phenomenon depicted in a magical poem dearest, Heidi! A fav! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2019 12:34:00 PM Thank you so much Demetrios. I am happy you consider it a Fav. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/21/2019 10:24:00 AM Enchanted! Fantastic piece Heidi. xomo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2019 10:31:00 AM Thank you very much Maureen :) Have a great day!