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Swallow An Ego

“When thoughts cease to flow ~ Where does ego go?” (by Unseeking Seeker) Swallow an ego like sour food When thoughts will cease to flow It does make sense for common good Together, dream and grow. Bubbles of Illusion Merge in single vision For world’s one ambition Let some pride sink, go Swallow an ego May 18,2022 8.56pm Quietus Created by” Unseeking Seeker,” consisting of one quatrain (syllable count 8-6-8-6 with a rhyme of abab ), one tercet (syllable count 6-6-6 with a rhyme scheme of ccc ), and one refrain with a rhyme scheme of (dd), made from a line of words from line one, how many words is your choice. The refrain is the title. Bubble of illusion Contest Judged: 5/20/2022 6:48:00 PM Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker Place 2

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Date: 5/25/2022 3:54:00 AM
Hey Len…..really enjoyed this poem…..love the title! So many need to swallow their ego!! Debx
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Date: 5/25/2022 3:55:00 AM
Oops….Enjoyed it so much I sent it twice haha!
Date: 5/25/2022 3:54:00 AM
Hey Len…..really enjoyed this poem…..love the title! So many need to swallow their ego!! Debx
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2022 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Deb for stopping by and for enjoying my poem. I'm glad you liked the title. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 5/21/2022 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/22/2022 6:22:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend Mark for stopping by and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you. Hugs
Date: 5/21/2022 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Wonderful" write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away....................
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/22/2022 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Paula for your precious time reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. So much appreciated. Have a blessed day/weekend too. Hugs
Date: 5/20/2022 8:13:00 PM
Ah! A quietus! Beautifully penned, Len. Congrats on your win
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/22/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for acknowledging my poem in your contest dear friend US. So much appreciated. God bless you. Hugs

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