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Rustling leaves I see Echoing behind me Twisted branches in a frenzy Shiver my spine instantly. Is that a mysterious face Hiding inside an arboreal place? Do I stay or do I flee? Is that something I fear in the tree? Will it follow or will it watch intently? I am still with curiosity.

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Date: 5/6/2020 5:54:00 PM
Nature is medicine. I wholly identify with this. Great write! Welcome to soup Alex, xomo!
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Alex Corns
Date: 5/6/2020 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, I think so too. But this creepy figure in the woods surprised me - see my pic. Nature is not always as expected
Date: 4/28/2020 3:03:00 AM
Nature always unfolds creative questions if looked at closely. Glad you picked up poetry from my favourite muse!
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Date: 4/28/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thanks I like to walk in nature every day
Date: 4/28/2020 2:35:00 AM
hallucination type the suspicious nature/// well crafted
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Date: 4/28/2020 8:35:00 AM
Thank you I felt suspicious when I wrote it
Date: 4/24/2020 10:16:00 PM
Your imagery creates a pretty poem.
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Date: 4/28/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thank you I think it worked out better than I intended

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