Alex Corns Poet Rhyme

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Suspicious Nature

Rustling leaves I see
Echoing behind me
Twisted branches in a frenzy
Shiver my spine instantly.
Is that a mysterious face
Hiding inside an arboreal place?
Do I stay or do I flee?
Is that something I fear in the tree?
Will it follow or will it watch intently?
I am still with curiosity.

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Sami Al-Khalili December 24, 2024 at 6:28 PM This piece gave me an inkling of a feeling like a goosebump in its seeding. A mystery from when it starts, an awe May it plot. The suspicious a feeling yes it be, was it a shadowy figure following thee?! Alex Corns April 30, 2025 at 6:49 PM Superb! Thank you for the poetry in your comment. It is an inviting dish duly served.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2020 at 5:54 PM Nature is medicine. I wholly identify with this. Great write! Welcome to soup Alex, xomo! Alex Corns May 6, 2020 at 9:51 PM Thank you, I think so too. But this creepy figure in the woods surprised me - see my pic. Nature is not always as expected

Nia Feren April 28, 2020 at 3:03 AM Nature always unfolds creative questions if looked at closely. Glad you picked up poetry from my favourite muse! Alex Corns April 28, 2020 at 8:39 AM Thanks I like to walk in nature every day

Mahtab Bangalee April 28, 2020 at 2:35 AM hallucination type the suspicious nature/// well crafted Alex Corns April 28, 2020 at 8:35 AM Thank you I felt suspicious when I wrote it

Caren Krutsinger April 24, 2020 at 10:16 PM Your imagery creates a pretty poem. Alex Corns April 28, 2020 at 8:34 AM Thank you I think it worked out better than I intended