Suspense In the Suburbs

En route to school to get the kids
We had a real surprise.
Two cops and a dog were running
Through the lawns, before our eyes.

“Look, a sweatshirt!” one called out.
“They must have come this way!”
Some police cars came careening by,
A local law display.

The schoolyard parents, on their phones, 
Found out what had transpired -
A stolen car, a crash, a chase - 
A lockdown was required.

We mulled around the yard and wondered
When they would release 
The kids from school, but then we heard
They’re waiting for the police.

Some forty minutes later,
All the bad guys had been caught. 
The children filed outside
With not a one of them distraught.

Though I live in the city
Where the crime rates often soar,
The suburbs brought some criminals
Right up to the front door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 11/3/2020 5:07:00 AM
Whoa! This is scary, especially when you do not have the children safely into your car yet.
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Date: 10/29/2020 7:34:00 PM
It get's a little disconcerting when in our own back yards it's skirting. Even in my own yard they've chased someone who surely was in haste. But in this world in which we live these things will always be. Someone gives chase, someone will flee. I've just always tried to make sure it wasn't me.
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Date: 10/24/2020 6:21:00 PM
Suburbs have to good for something -- right, Ilene? lol... I try to stay out of them at all costs... Rural areas are fine, though... ~ One confirmed city-dweller to another
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Date: 10/23/2020 4:27:00 PM
Wow! True story? Great.
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Date: 10/23/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thank goodness for police officers who are willing to go into harm's way. Though their reputation has been sullied this year due to some bad apples, there are many good ones protecting the public.
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:37:00 PM
The terrible thing is that mothers (and grandmothers) go through that every day around the world, but in the USA, Trump's leadership has certainly lead to a rise in crime as families struggle to survive. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/23/2020 1:42:00 PM
Oh how scary for it to happen so close to the school and in the suburbs, so glad it had a happy ending Ilene:-) hugs jan xx
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