Suspended Sentence

Your chocolate teeth will be rotting you little cheeky devil

But I’ll take this mischievous ‘treat’ to a much higher level

Spike the candy bars with castor oil and laxative suspension

You’ll wish the loo was closer and for a surgical bowel extension

We’re brothers so I Won’t tell Daddy and Mommy why you excrete

So much but between you me and toilet paper we can share a secret

Can’t wait until Christmas to remind you in detail of all that crap

Of how the yummy stuff made you hurt and your guts on full tap

When explosions have finished and I’m praised for my care and concern

You’ll be relieved in two way because my sweet revenge is taciturn


30th October
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:07 PM
G'day Kai ... revenge is sweeter than the stolen sweets, but watch your back - Lindsay
Neumann Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:53 AM
Hi Lindsay. Thank you and kind wishes. It is pouring down with rain here in Valencia. Duvet Day. Chocolate and writing poetry. Kai
Messina Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 6:41 AM
He will never steal your candy again (lol) Great write Kai. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 5:06 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. It was virtually a last minute entry. Kind wishes, Kai
May Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your placement
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October 30, 2019 at 7:30 AM
True story????
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